Hello Friends!
If you are just back to school, welcome back to school! I wish you and your new teacher and new friends a joyful and meaningful year ahead, and I look forward to writing together and perhaps meeting some of you and reading your work.
You will notice that The Poem Farm has a new search feature. Thank you so much to Marisa Saelzler who helped me so perfectly with this. You may search by topic, poetic technique, or type of poem. To learn more about this, click the FIND A POEM tab above.
Photo by Amy LV
Students - Today's poem is about a small, surprise event that happened just this week at The Poem Farm. I went to get my mail from the big blue mailbox, and the small newspaper box next to it held one big tomato, two small cherry tomatoes, and a few flowers. It seemed they may have been left the day before, and the whole scene in my newspaper box made me so happy. Right away I knew that I would write about the generosity of this mystery-giver.
As you write this week, you might wish to look out for kindnesses - surprise or not - or to remember past kindnesses you have given or received. Somehow just thinking and writing about such memories makes our todays better.
One thing you may notice about this poem is that I repeat a lot of words. This repetetion just seemed to happen on its own at first, but then, I so enjoyed the feeling of the poem's words rolling over on themselves that I just kept at it, repeating words on purpose. Which repeated words do you find?
If you want to try this with your own writing, just begin writing with an ear for repetition. You might begin a line with the last word of the line before. You might repeat a whole line or thread up words from earlier in your poem. There are many ways to repeat, and repetition adds a song-like quality to your poem.
September 19, 2024 Update - My talented friend, English Professor and Musican Gart Westerhout is once again back with a song version of a poem. Please enjoy "Summer Mystery," sung by Gart. Thank you, friend!
Buffy is hosting this week's Poetry Friday roundup over at Buffy Silverman with an early book celebration for her forthcoming beautiful STARLIGHT SYMPHONY and a poem about a walking stick. Each Friday, all are invited to share poems, poem books, poetry ideas, and friendship in this open and welcoming poetry community.
Happy Septembering!
xo,
Amy
ps - Yes...I did find out who the mystery tomato-giver was. It was two wonderful girls who live on our road...so many thank yous to them. The tomatoes were deee-licious!
Ah the summer sweetness of the mystery tomato gift--I can taste it in your poem, even without the photo!
ReplyDeleteMaybe this is a nerdy thing, Amy, but every time I read/hear one of your poems, this is how it goes: I read it and savor the words and the feelings. Then I can’t resist, I have to diagram it to dissect the rhythm and meter and rhyme and marvel at its perfection with intentional imperfection. Then I throw that all away and read it again, feeling more satisfied for the peek under the lid.
ReplyDeleteLove this summer mystery. Charming poem. :)
ReplyDeleteFinding surprises like that one is very nice, Amy, and your poem makes a great thank you, too!
ReplyDeleteWhat a joyful, red surprise!
ReplyDeleteLove so much! We continue to write poems every week and celebrate them on Fridays! I’m excited to share this post with them on Monday ♥️♥️
ReplyDeleteGotta love a mystery that's wrapped in love and kindness!
ReplyDeleteDelightful! The mystery and the sweetness if summer tomatoes is just perfect today.
ReplyDeleteA little bit of juicy joy on a summer's day!
ReplyDeleteAmy, a juicy tomato and the color red are a great setting for a summer mystery.
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