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Welcome, friends, to the 7th annual Kidlitosphere Progressive Poem. Each year our poetfriend Irene Latham (do not miss her April Poetry Project) brings folks together for a potluck poem where in time, everyone who wishes brings a line to share.
When I read Liz Steinglass's opening line this year, I was ready to follow the adventure. I love seeds and nestled things and the word cozy. And since I live near Buffalo, NY, where our last bits of snow melted just today, I am excited for green and growing.
Reading Tabatha's line yesterday, thinking about how Jas is now writing a poem, and we're on our way to a party for Lee, I wanted to bring Lee back into the poem....and what better thing than to bring wordgifts to someone we love?
Enjoy!
Nestled in her cozy bed, a seed stretched.
Oh, what wonderful dreams she had!
Blooming in midnight moonlight, dancing with
the pulse of a thousand stars, sweet Jasmine
invented a game.
"Moon?" she called across warm honeyed air.
"I'm sad you're alone; come join Owl and me.
We're feasting on stardrops, we'll share them with you."
"Come find me," Moon called, hiding behind a cloud.
Secure in gentle talons' embrace, Jasmine rose
and set. She split, twining up Owl's toes, pale
moonbeams sliding in between, Whoosh, Jasmine goes.
Owl flew Jasmine between clouds and moon to Lee's party!
Moon, that wily bright balloon, was NOT alone.
Jas grinned,
stretched,
reached,
wrapped
a new,
around tender
rootlet
a trellis Sky held out to her, made of braided wind and song.
Her green melody line twisted and clung.
Because she was twining poet's jasmine, she
wiggled a wink back at Moon, and began her poem.
Her whispered words floated on a puff of wind,
filled with light and starsong. "Revelers, lean in –
let's add to this merriment a game that grows
wordgifts for Lee. He's a man who knows
And now, I leave Jas's poem in the hands of the capable Mary Lee Hahn (do not miss her April poetry project), a gift of a teacher who also knows tons about words and gifting them to others.
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To follow the poem day-by-day, please see below!
April
1 Liz at Elizabeth Steinglass
2 Jane at Raincity Librarian
3 Laura at Writing the World for Kids
4 Michelle at Today's Little Ditty
5 Jan at bookseedstudio
6 Irene at Live Your Poem
7 Linda at TeacherDance
8 Janet F. at Live Your Poem
9 Ramona at Pleasures from the Page
10 Matt at Radio, Rhythm and Rhyme
11 Brenda at Friendly Fairy Tales
12 Carol at Beyond LiteracyLink
13 Linda at A Word Edgewise
14 Heidi at my juicy little universe
15 Donna at Mainely Write
16 Sarah at Sarah Grace Tuttle
17 Ruth at There is no such thing as a Godforsaken town
18 Christie at Wondering and Wandering
19 Michelle at Michelle Kogan
20 Linda at Write Time
21 Robyn at Life on the Deckle Edge
22 Tabatha at The Opposite of Indifference
23 Amy at The Poem Farm
24 Mary Lee at A Year of Reading
25 Kiesha at Whispers from the Ridge
26 Renee at No Water River
27 Buffy at Buffy's Blog
28 Kat at Kat's Whiskers
29 April at Teaching Authors
30 Doraine at Dori Reads
Please share a comment below if you wish.
Oh, I love it! This poem has been so fun to watch grow....it really does seem like a quick growing vine to me. Lovely line, Amy. Thanks for showing the whole poem.
ReplyDeleteIt's lovely to bring the "word master" back into this adventure in the sky, Amy. It's feeling very like another party!
ReplyDeleteLovely wordgifts! And to bring them back to Lee... brava! xo
ReplyDeletePerfect. Wordgifts for Lee. He's a man who knows....the poem's the thing, in fact it can be everything.....can't wait to hear the rest.
ReplyDeleteJanet Clare F.
I just saw Mary Lee's post and thought, Yikes, I haven't even read the line for Monday. So I backtracked and showed up here first. What fun! I can't wait to see what wordgifts Mary Lee dreams up. And I love that Jasmine's poem is rhyming (at least for now).
ReplyDelete"wordgifts" that's special! Wonder where it will go…
ReplyDelete(Clap clap clap...) Well done. I was hoping a rhyme might appear in this line! :0)
ReplyDeleteOh, after your comment to Tabatha and Elena, I was expecting stardrops, but I'm so very happy that you swung it back around so that Lee (once surprisingly introduced) could actually enjoy his own bash! And it was perfect timing for a rhyme. Roll on Mary Lee! (says me, scrambling to catch up after a hard week. Please know that I will be taking part in your Poems Are Teachers challenge sometime in the near future. It's a brilliant, brilliant stretching exercise. Hope the book is selling like hotcakes!)
ReplyDeleteThis line!
ReplyDeleteGroovy to be partying with Lee some more. What does he know???? luv *wordgifts*. Amy your words are always appreciated gifts.
A rhyme and a wordgifts for Lee-great. I wonder what the next line will be.
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